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Prosetry

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"You died last night. I killed you."

"Pardon?"

"I've killed you many times. In many dreams."

"Do you want to kill me now?"

"No. Why would I?"

"But you want me dead, right?"

"The thing about reality is, it has consequences."

"So you always got away with it?"

"Of course, it's not like morals apply or anything in my own dream world."

"..."

"Hey, isn't it stupid? Wishing, that is."

"What?"

"Have you ever made a wish on a star?"

"A few times? Why-?"

"It's pointless. Looking up at a lonely sky, you wish but sound doesn't travel through space. No matter how loud you SHOUT, your voice won't reach into the universe. And, even so, what could they possibly do for you? There's no one to grant their wish either. You might as well make a wish on a remote control."

"Where are you going with this?"

"Dandelions too. They're considered 'weeds' but people still make wishes and spread their seeds for even more wishes. I think if I ever get married, my bouquet will be dandelions."

"Even if they're 'pointless'?"

"Life is full of sentimental gestures, whether they're sincere or not."

"You want to marry someone you can't be sincere with?"

"Saccharine."

"Huh?"


"It means nauseatingly sweet. Sometimes I wish I could just hit random people with this dictionary, say something like 'tumultuous' and have them look it up.'"

"What would be the point of that?"

"Exactly."
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:iconimhappyplz: Happy Thanksgiving!

Um, I dunno what this is. ' Prosetry', I guess (couldn't think of a better title)? Eh, I'm not good at writing dialogue. Prolly won't do anything like this again unless I get inspired or whatever. Or can't think of anything to write at 2 AM. But yeah, whatever. It doesn't really have a point and it's kinda random. Feel free to interpret it however you want, even though I think it's pretty straightforward. And vague at the same time lol.

And I was looking through an old dictionary I had last night too. I like looking up random words lol XD It's very helpful; people really need to use it more often. Not just the ones who learned English as a second language like me XD

Some of you should start off a conversation that way, and see how the reactions go XD

I wrote something else, I'll upload that later. Might fix a few things in that first though.

EDIT: salkfj[aifjaifjsa HOLY CRAP I dun think I've ever gotten like 10+ faves within two days of submitting a writing. XD Guess I'm thankful for this being so successful lol. Thanks~!

EDIT 2: [link] Now with voices! :D

[link] And again XD
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very significant, your poetry is so good, I read it so tense LOL xD

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